Topic: Physician-assisted suicide
MC1: So...what did they say? Can they cure it?
MC3: …...No.
MC1: Well if they can’t fix you, what are they going to do? Just… let you die?
MC3: *nods* Actually...I’m going to...kill...myself.
MC1: WHAT!? Why?? You always said that you wouldn’t! After I convince you again, y-you won’t! I-I won’t let you!
MC3: It’s okay, there’s...nothing you can do...I...already have it.
MC1: Have what!? A knife? A gun?
MC3: A drug. Medicine….
MC1: Medicine wouldn’t kill you! What did they give you?? What drug? How do you die?!
MC3: ST...Pavulon...that kind of...that kind of stuff...it’s...prescribed.
MC1: Duit, that’s-that’s crazy! Injections are completely-UUUAAAGGHH!
MC3: I’ve already decided...and I’m happy with it.
MC1: Wh-wha-HAPPY!? Happy with death!? Why-*sniff* why would you DO THAT!?
MC3: Don’t act...surprised...you’ve always known….I was comfortable on the edge, Ima.
MC1: But this would be falling over the edge!! I know you’re a daredevil, but this is t-too far!
PH1: Alright, visitings are over, Ima.
*MC1 notices PH1 has the injection*
MC1: I won’t let you hurt him!
PH1: Hurt? He’ll be numbed, no pain will be felt.
MC1: Numbed???
PH1: Please relax, mister. Your friend has not been forced. Now, please allow us to perform the procedure.
MC1: NO! You can’t!
PH1: Security!
*MC1 gets dragged out of room and locked out*
MC1: No! You can’t! Stop! Don’t you dare--
*MC1 summons yellow flames*
MC1: --TOUCH HIM!!!
*room falls silent, everyone is staring at MC3*
*MC1 pushes through them and notices MC3’s hand sprawled over the injection*
MC1: He…he did it. H-he’s-Duit is-d-dead.
MC1: I-
*MC1 starts stepping back*
MC1: He’s...I can’t...n-no…
SCENE 2
*wakes up from sleeping*
*MC1 breathes heavily*
MC2: You know however many times you do that, you can’t undo the past, Ima.
MC1: Oh, shut up.
MC2: You seriously need to stop, buddy. You’re going to go insane.
MC1: Why would I go insane?
MC2: This is the 31st time you’ve tried to do that.
MC2: I’m worried about you, okay? You’ve been acting weird since--ya know.
MC1: *sigh* Why would they even-it’s a hospital. They’re supposed to keep people ALIVE. It’s just-It’s just stupid!
MC2: It’s what he wanted, though.
MC1: You can’t say that! He-he wouldn’t!
MC2: But he did.
MC1: SHUT UP!! YOU DON’T KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT DUIT!
MC2: Ima…I know this is hard, but--
MC1: BUT NOTHING! BUT NOTHING, NELL! Just...just go away...
*MC1 starts crying into his sleeve. MC2 puts her hand on his shoulder*
SCENE 3
*MC1 is on his computer, and goes to his email*
MC1: Assisted suicide is stupid. I don’t-it goes against the freaking hippo-something oath….wait...what’s this?
*MC1 clicks on a video*
“Hoi Ima, I know I’m…probably dead by the time you see this, but-I wanted to give you a last goodbye. I know you didn’t want me to do the whole ‘assisted suicide’ thing, but you have to understand. There is no way to cure it, so, I, uh, I’m-in a lot a pain, so, um, hoo boy…Haaaaaa ha haa… *passes out* background voice: whoa are you oka-*camera cuts out*
*MC1 is being emotional through the whole video*
MC1: It…it saved him.

You did a really good job have more than one charters perspectives on point of views, also I like your drawings.
ReplyDeleteYou did very good with difrent point of views also I like your drawings a lot.
ReplyDeleteI loved how we got to see from different peoples perspectives and the characters showed so much emotion in the story. I also love the ending and how his mind shifted on assisted suicides. lydia h
ReplyDeletenatalia s. I liked the story line and how it was so intense. I also liked the art Great Job :)
ReplyDeleteI loved how I got to see many different peoples perspectives. I also love the art work. This story really brings out how serious your topic is.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth.G